One valve, two valve,
Mollusk, mussel,
Shells itself from
Hustle, bustle.
Keeping still is
No impediment.
Buried under
Muddy sediment.
But when it tires
Of life’s low lull,
It hitches to
A tanker’s hull
And rides the trade routes
While it can
From Kowloon Bay
North to Japan.
Copyright © 2012 Steven Withrow. From the book National Geographic Book of Animal Poetry. National Geographic Children’s Books. Reprinted by permission of the author.
The electric charge of any good poem is a matter of friction: the physical force resisting the relative motion of stanzas, lines, sentences, phrases, syllables, consonants, vowels, and other material elements sliding against each other. Children feel this charge whether or not they grasp every nuance of a poem’s ideas.
Some of the most finely charged poems in existence can be found in the anonymous trove of Mother Goose Rhymes. For my poem about the noble mussel for J. Patrick Lewis’s excellent animal anthology, I tried to emulate the force and motion of Mother Goose while using modern vocabulary and imagery.
Steven Withrow is a poet, storyteller, and author of six books for visual artists including Illustrating Children’s Picture Books. In 2010, he co-produced the film Library of the Early Mind: A grownup view of children’s literature. In 2011, he founded Poetry Advocates for Children & Young Adults. His poems for children and adults have appeared in numerous journals and anthologies worldwide. He lives with his wife, daughter, and cat in Rhode Island. See more about Steven and his work at www.cracklesofspeech.blogspot.com.